Cpt._Funkotron wrote:Anyone know when the next contest is?
JamishT wrote:To me, the feedback said that I didn't really explain the world very well, and that's totally valid.
Basically in Maybelline's world, plastic is currency, dudes get...um...tended to every day, but babies are only made by artificially inseminating specific women. I thought about going more into those last two things, but then I didn't. I wanted to show that the society was kinda sorta civilized, and some were trying to make it better like in the days of "the Ancients" (aka, us)...
The Germans were on a large yacht in my mind, and they've already figured the whole motors and civilization thing out.
A Combustible Lemon wrote:Death is an archaic concept for simpleminded commonfolk, not Victorian scientist whales.
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