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Add a verse Universe

Postby Krashlia » Thu Jul 07, 2016 2:06 am

In which i get self-indulgent and wonder who's willing to play a silly game.
The rules? Add verses.


BELIEVE-
THIS RECITE
SEE IN THE SKY SHE COMES IN HER MIGHTY VEHICLE!
LOOK FROM THE HEAVENS SHE BEARS DOWN [in]
HER MIGHTY VEHICLE FROM THE SKY A MAN IN RUBY EMERALD AND WHITE-
EUREKA HAIL!
FROM [the] OPEN HEAD SHE STANDS BEFORE SILVER LIGHT
IN WHO- IN WHOSE VISAGE MAKES THE MOON SHINES BRIGHT-
[In whose] VISAGE THE MOON SHINES BRIGHT!

Flow 1:1-8

EDIT: Okay, there are rule(s). Number your verses after you write them. That name, "Flow" is the general name of the text. So it should go like this: Flow # : #
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Re: Add a verse Universe

Postby DashaBlade » Thu Jul 07, 2016 4:10 am

Stars twinkle brightly in the sky
The air, full of moisture, drapes the earth like a soggy blanket
The mighty one speaks in echoes
Wondering if she is understanding the point of this.







(seriously, am I doing it right?)
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Re: Add a verse Universe

Postby Krashlia » Thu Jul 07, 2016 6:05 am

DashaBlade wrote:
Stars twinkle brightly in the sky
The air, full of moisture, drapes the earth like a soggy blanket
The mighty one speaks in echoes
Wondering if she is understanding the point of this.







(seriously, am I doing it right?)

(Wouldnt that make that Flow 1:9-12?)



Theres nothing wrong here, its just collection and continuation.

Flow 1:13




(But seriously, Its fine. I'm just letting this "game" hang out to see what the heck turns up)
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Re: Add a verse Universe

Postby JamishT » Thu Jul 07, 2016 7:06 am

There are countries rebuilding still,
After the invasion of the Fire Nation.
Here we are contributing this piece,
To the literature and art collection.
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Re: Add a verse Universe

Postby Krashlia » Thu Jul 07, 2016 4:49 pm

Ok, that counts as Flow 1:14-17...

Ahem...

(See. Read) ARISE FLAMING NATION
Though you were made with the dust of the earth! ARISE!
A PEOPLE WITH HOT BLOOD IN YOUR VEINS AND THE FIRE IN YOUR HEARTS

Flow 1:18-20
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Re: Add a verse Universe

Postby Krashlia » Tue Jul 12, 2016 5:45 am

The dog ate verses 21 to 36...
Yes, thats the excuse I'm going with in this double post.
What? Don't look at me like that.
No, Screw You! I AM THE ONE WHO WRITES THE VERSES!
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Re: Add a verse Universe

Postby Grimstone » Tue Jul 12, 2016 8:27 am



The crest of turbidity, seeping out.
An insolent vessel of madness.
Boiling up, denying, numbness, blinking, obstructing slumber.
The steel princess who creeps.
The mud doll, ever disintegrating.
Unite! Oppose!
Filling the earth, know your own impotence!




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Hadō 90: Black Coffin (Kurohitsugi)
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Re: Add a verse Universe

Postby Krashlia » Sat Jul 16, 2016 10:41 pm

ok, that was Flow 1:37 -- 43...

And we didn't borrow it from anywhere guys! It was totally original verses from the mind of its creator... Oy...


But this thing won't accept death
Indeed because of him it lies still in wait!
For it will rise, black and fearsome and their behest
And with fire and glory reign[rain?] Upon the world in the week of hate!


Flow 1:44 - 47
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Re: Add a verse Universe

Postby Krashlia » Sun Feb 19, 2017 3:46 am

Quoth Ris-Lhaka Flow, Chapter 2 (has been brought to you by Hate Week)

1
And I sit in this dark chamber to tell the generations

The generations the future!

2
Hear oh U-maud'ir! For this is your future!

3
Your once dark thick manes shall become thin and grey

The strong body you have prided yourself on will be stubborn to you.

4
For it will say, "I have given him years of thankless service.

What of my wages!"

5
Behold, the Strong stone pillar of U-maud'ir shall then be as sponge

6
(Verse Lost)

7
Then, will his neighbors see him and pity

And he will think to himself,

8
"Oh how the mighty have lost their strength!

Why did my mom vote Reagan!"


Flow 2:1-8
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Re: Add a verse Universe

Postby Krashlia » Sun Feb 19, 2017 3:53 am

Flow, Chapter 2 (continued)

9
So quoth U-maud'ir, See? I hast wandered into a Ris-Lhaka thread.

What's going on here? Who knows.


10
Why is it so disjointed? See the sentence at the top of the post.


11
My mother didn't vote for Reagan either, ass. She voted for Mondale.

And what's this "strong body" talk?

12
I mean I'm probably the most hardcore pussy walking the Earth

but I'm probably below average strength for my size, build, and age.

But yeah keep complimenting me during hate week."
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Re: Add a verse Universe

Postby Krashlia » Sun Feb 19, 2017 4:04 am

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And so these accusations were made against the writer

14
By this U-maud'ir villain.

15
Fear not, said the writer for have gone forth and discovered these things
*That truth may be known that lives may be saved!

*(commentary: missing reference)
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Re: Add a verse Universe

Postby Krashlia » Sun Feb 19, 2017 4:15 am

Flow, Chapter 2 (continued)

16
(Verse Lost)

17
Quoth U-maud'ir, Dost thou know something I do not? I've only begotten the one.

18
Go ahead and try to chew on his bones. And break your teeth, for it is metal! So shall I have the last laugh.
Commentary: Indications that these verses have undergone modification and interpolation. Possibly inauthentic
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Re: Add a verse Universe

Postby Krashlia » Sun Feb 19, 2017 4:50 am

Flow, Chapter 2 (continued)

19
And we asked among ourselves, "Who is he [Maud'ir] and why is his image [Avatar] in the state that it is (or 'Like that')?"

20
And we received an answer that said: his image is that ...(missing text)... distorted around the mouth.

21
Don't you see that he was made to kill and desire to kill? That distortion [of the mouth] is the drip of much blood, The blood of innocents that he has eaten with ...(Missing Text)...

22
Beware this U-maud'ir's distorted mind,

for he lies and distorts the truth about This Maker this week of hate as he was fated to by The Mod Greatests.

23
Beware his maw with which he vomits the lie and death unto unexpecting people yet he believes hes doing a good deed for the whole of TCS.

24
This tapestry that I weave is not of manifesto madness, but of good glory! And I will not halt or stop until I have done my pleasure in this forum!

25
But he is [Maud'ir] who is here to Murder You!

26
And he says of himself, "I rot with the filthy stench of deception! I am the diarrhea that strikes in the night! I am the midnight hour insomnia and the reason your boss hates you in secret! Behold, it is my genitals drawn on your forehead and cheek!"

But do not despair, for this hate shall pass and it shall not be I, but him, who shall eat the great fattest bag of genitals!

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May TCS know these verses about him, comprehending.
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Re: Add a verse Universe

Postby Krashlia » Sun Feb 19, 2017 5:06 am

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Quoth U-Maud'ir, Well, I hast swiftly struck yer ass.


So the verse commences:
Though I'm too lazy to center my paragraphs
I do admit guilt to one of the charges levied

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I've got a stencil of my crotch area and its easily applied
Though fortune does not show me any favors for [thee]

30
Because its barely legible and can fit on an earlobe
Laugh if you must but please know th[ese]

31
Look closer at the small tattoos on passerbys
Something you cannot unsee


Commentary: This section shows signs of tampering and modification. The original verses likely did not make use of rhyme, as this renditions seems to have been made to. Furthermore, the text has undergone style changes that do not reflect on the written content. Possibly inauthentic, unreliable narration.
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Re: Add a verse Universe

Postby Krashlia » Sun Feb 19, 2017 5:32 am

Commentary on Flow 2

The second chapter of "The Flow" has come to be known as "The Hateful Verses". In it, it describes a dialogue between two characters, presumably the writer of this chapter and some unknown rival. Due to the adversarial and heated nature of the chapter, it has generated much controversy and has been the subject of various attempts at interpretation by other commentators. Some believe that these verses were a moral parable whose meaning has been lost to the years. Literalists have been especially favorable to this interpretation, advocating for searching for this legendary figure Mad'ir and laws banning the name. Others believe that it is simply a retelling of historical events or even a political tract.

Of just as great a subject of inquiry is the 6th verse. Though the original is missing, it is referred to in outside, extant texts. Kyonphilus the Cynic wrote of it, "I express great curiosity over the meaning of this verse, and I quoth Ris-Lhaka, as is written by author, and his seed in my belly!".
Various interpreters have called this verse apocryphal, others believing that it is a scribal error that was long removed from the original text. Yet others, mostly adherents of the "Political tract" theory believe that this removal was the result of sanitizers and spin doctors attempting to make the text more palatable to future readers.
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